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Agony and Rapture Chapter 6

  • Nov. 12th, 2007 at 7:41 PM
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Title: Agony and Rapture
Rating: PG-13
Summary: When Doumeki starts tutoring a girl for math, he ends up spending more time with her, and less with Watanuki. Watanuki is NOT jealous. Really!
Disclaimer: Characters belong to clamp!
A/N: WARNING: There is a LOT of angst, and still more to come...Sorry to say it, but it is only going to get worse... Because I am some sort of terrible sadist...XD. Beta'd by the wonderful lehst, I love you so much!


"So you came crying to me, just like Nobita-kun," Yuuko said, the last part in almost a whispered and faded into laugher.

"I AM NOT CRYING!" I yelled back at her, waving my arms around, "and I didn't cry earlier either!"

"Oh no? Really, you should apologize to Doumeki-kun."

"I don't even know what I did, how am I supposed to apologize if I don't even know what is wrong?"

"Well, then maybe you should just ask him," she said. Her pointer finger started poking my cheek as she continued, "My, my, Watanuki-kun is a stubborn boy!"

"Stubborn boy!" Maru and Moro echoed.

I glared at the girls for a moment, and then with a sigh, went off to do my chores. Yuuko's dinner request followed me down the hall, along with an order of sake.

"You're going to have liver problems!" my voice echoed back down the hall.

"Is Watanuki-kun worried?"

"NO!"

I stomped into the kitchen, starting dinner. All the ridiculous things that Yuuko had asked me to make. Most of the items that she had listed for me to make were things that I had not made before, so I ended up looking for a recipe for them.

Luckily, Yuuko did own cook books.

But even with that small amount of help, the food took forever, and then Yuuko had more for me to do. I was all over the house that evening; scrubbing floors, dusting her treasure room, watering plants (I didn't even realise before today that she had a tiny garden, and it didn't really seem to be new or anything). I washed walls, re-painted one of the rooms, and replaced paper doors (why did they even need replacing?).

By the time I was done, it was after midnight, and I was completely exhausted.

With a sigh, I fell back onto my bed.

Mugetsu was snuggled up against the stuffed panda that lay atop one of my pillows. The stuffed panda that was supposed to cheer me up, but for some reason, it hadn't been working at all.

But wait...Yuuko NEVER gave gifts without some sort of payment, and I had not payed her for it, or had she just added that to the long list of other things that I owed her for? She hadn't said anything about it at all.

Then something caught my eye. The stuffed animal's tag, just below where Mugetsu's tiny head rested.

I gently lifted the toy, hoping not to wake the pipe fox that seemed to be sleeping so peacefully. He really was very cute.

I smiled at the pipe fox, and then looked at the tag, my eyes widened.

Written on the tag in kanji was 'Dou-me-ki'.

It was at that point that I realised, maybe I really was crazy.

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I awoke the next morning, the sun on my face, feeling the most pleasent I have felt in weeks.

Mugetsu was snuggled under my chin, his soft fur rubbing against my neck.

"Good morning," I said to the pipe fox, lightly patting him on the head. I still had the stuffed panda bear held to my chest, just above my heart. The bear that was really from Doumeki, and not from Yuuko.

From Doumeki. And I liked that. That was just... weird.

"Watanuki-kun! Mistress wants pancakes!"

I practically fell out of the bed when the two girls appeared. Mugetsu jumped back, making a startled sound. Poor thing.

I jumped out of bed and got dressed, after shooing the girls out of the room and scolding them for waking me up like that. I wasn't about to tell them that I had already been awake.

Once I was dressed, I gave the stuffed panda bear one last hug before I left the room.

Flour, baking powder, eggs, milk, butter, salt. What else would Yuuko like with her pancakes? Maybe some bacon..tea.. And she'd probably ask for alcohol, but there was no way in hell I was giving her alcohol this early in the morning.

I measured out the ingredients mixing the required ones in seperate bowls, before combining them and stirring them together.

Stove on, bacon being made on one side, the pancakes on the other. I added chocolate chips to the pancakes and shaped them into little bears. I was practically dancing about the kitchen, light as air, happy.

"My, it seems that Watanuki-kun's energy has returned. You came crying to me last night, like Nobita-kun, and now you look like a child that was just given a giant lollipop."

"I was NOT crying!" I yelled back at her, "And just so you know, I am in a good mood this morning, and you should be thanking me for these wonderful pancakes!"

I was serving her only moments later, one bite and she was asking me if I could make anything that was bad, completely in love with the breakfast before her.

I sighed, and glanced over at the clock.

"Damn! I'm gonna be late for school!" I exclaimed, running to the other room to get my bag and to the entrance to get my shoes.

"NO THANKS FOR SAYING GOODBYE!" trailed a voice behind me as I ran out the door, through the gate and down the street toward Cross Private High School.

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"Watanuki-kun is full of energy today!" Himawari exclaimed as I handed her one of the bento boxes I had made the night before.

I was feeling a lot better today, even if I hadn't had a chance to talk to Doumeki yet, but I knew I would soon.

We sat in our classroom, and it was just after a session with my teacher. She said my grades were starting to go back up again, and she wondered how much longer I would need to stay in here for lunch. That was good, yet another thing to add to the things that made me happy today.

Someone walked by the door, and I looked up from where I sat. I stood up and walked across the room, seeing Doumeki walking away. I ran back to the desk and picked up the third bento box. I had been making one for him every day, even though I hadn't been eating with him.

Then I ran back to the hall and followed him

"Dou-me-ki!" I called out.

He stopped. Not again, not again, not again. I froze once more as he turned around, the time between my heart beats decreased, yet it felt like the moment dragged on for eternity.

"I... I brought you lunch," I finally stuttered.

He must be busy, and I didn't want to be a nuisance or anything, so when he took the box and gave me a smile, I ended up blushing and running back to the classroom.

"Watanuki-kun? Something wrong?" Himawari asked.

"No, not at all," I replied, still panting a bit from the short run.

"You're blushing!" she commented, a bright smile on her face.

Why did people have to notice these things?

"It's nothing, Himawari-chan, really!"

I returned the smile and sat down by her, picking up my chopsticks and eating again. The bento box that I had given to Doumeki, belonged to Yuuko. I would have to get it back at some point, which meant... I'd have to talk to Doumeki later. Was I ready to talk to him yet?

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Comments

[info]sarahxchan wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 01:45 am (UTC)
ldsflkadsjflksf! You've got me on edge for the next chapter. D:
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 02:12 am (UTC)
Really? lol.
[info]sarahxchan wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 02:42 am (UTC)
Yes really! :D
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 02:48 am (UTC)
lol, this chapter wasn't particularly amazing.
[info]sillyangelfaery wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 03:51 am (UTC)
Um, what do you mean, "This chapter wasn't particularly amazing?" IT WAS DAMN CUTE WAS WHAT IT WAS! THE PANDA -- FROM DOUMEKI? And Watanuki giving Doumeki the bento...KYAAAAA!

I adore you. I truly do. ^_^ ♥
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 03:55 am (UTC)
XD, you really liked it??? lol

On a unrelated side note.. I drew human Mugetsu.. It may end up being a mini-comic.
[info]sillyangelfaery wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 04:52 am (UTC)
...

i may just love you now.
wait. i already do.
so.

I FREAKING LOVE YOU MORE. ♥ x FOREVER.
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 05:03 am (UTC)
lol, I guess you like that idea then? lol
[info]lonewolfe001 wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 05:15 am (UTC)
aaawww!! that was so sweet. omg i can just picture Watanuki cuddling his panda from doumeki.
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 02:39 pm (UTC)
A note from Doumeki:

"I will be your panda."

*Raises eyebrow*

WHAT THE HELL???
[info]renki_chan wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 09:23 am (UTC)
Oh my...Watanuki hugging the panda , so sweet *__*
I must draw that XD
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 02:40 pm (UTC)
lol, You're not the first one to tell me that either.. haha.
[info]black_feenix wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 11:01 am (UTC)
awwwwwwww. So the panda was from Doumeki!!! how cute....I thought you said there'd be more Watanuki torture!! XD Very cute how he sleep really well after finding out the bear was from Doumeki.
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 02:41 pm (UTC)
There is more torture.. That chapter was to lighten the mood.
[info]black_feenix wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2007 08:00 am (UTC)
Haeh. Well, the name of the story is Agony and Rapture!! Little bit of rapture and plenty of agony it looks like!
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2007 01:05 pm (UTC)
Well... in the middle at least... The 'rapture' is mostly for the end.
[info]black_feenix wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2007 01:31 pm (UTC)
As it should!! XD
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2007 01:43 pm (UTC)
Of course!
[info]kurorinslvr wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 12:04 pm (UTC)
it was so cute. and the panda from Doumeki, watanuki hugging it is even morecute. I'm trying to make assumption on what is the reason Doumeki stopped talking to Watanuki. I just have to wait
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 02:42 pm (UTC)
XD... Read the comments on the previous chapters.. The last one specifically.. It tells why Doumeki is mad in one of them...
[info]kurorinslvr wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 06:36 pm (UTC)
haha, i know now, thanks to sillyangelfaery.
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 07:07 pm (UTC)
Yep, she's one smart cookie that girl.. You can learn something from her Kendra-chan!
[info]batty_angel wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 09:05 pm (UTC)
*sitting on the edge of her chair, eyes glued to screen*

ooooh, Watanuki is going to talk to Doumeki? *falls off chair but waits for the next chapter*
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 10:00 pm (UTC)
haha. Yep. Well.. He's going to try at least.
[info]daydreamer64 wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 09:10 pm (UTC)
OMG I think I you have just killed me with that ending. I swear I love you so much right now for a pure silly chapter-but it seemed a whole lot MORE happier than the last ones! ^-^

*sighs* Now I know how Watanuki feels. I have just figured I don't hate a guy but I actually like him. Oh good God help me... -_-'I was nearly hit by two cars while thinking about it(that's how out of it I was XD).
[info]piph_chan wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 10:02 pm (UTC)
Dear, I so know how that feels, I was in the same situation, except that once I found out how I truly felt, he was already gone. I have not seen him ever since.

Watanuki better not wait for too long or else!! ;__;
[info]daydreamer64 wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 10:35 pm (UTC)
Good thing I know the guy is going to be in class tomorrw-oh crap how am I going to face him? And his teases? *panics and flails*

Watanuki BETTER not take too long although in the latest chappie he seems to have realized a few things sam with Doumeki! XD have you read Chapter 145 yet? It's awesome! ^.^
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 10:56 pm (UTC)
Yeah. I read it of course.. lol. I've been keeping up it was awesome and made me happy and stuff..

Well.. He teases you? That is actually a good sign...
[info]daydreamer64 wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2007 09:12 pm (UTC)
It made me very giddy to read it. I mean Doumeki's question of "did you hit your head?" was pricless! XD Adn then Watanuki's thoughts of the cat was equally priceless! XD

Yes, he teases me... A LOT actually. >.< I guess that's once reason why I saw him as annoying and well... an annoying friend... -_-' I often complained about hating him (kinda like Watanuki XD) and saying that his teasings just irked me and made him annoying! (Wow I never noticed how alike to Watanuki I am... >_>) And then I realized just yesterday that I don't hate him. XD It was so weird! Today he didn't do anything though. :( I didn't even see him much-but tomorrow I will! I vow to do so! (Man I sound like I'm in a cheesy romance movie... XD)
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2007 09:16 pm (UTC)
Haha! Well there is one thing to say about that; stuff like that makes life that much more interesting!
[info]daydreamer64 wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2007 10:05 pm (UTC)
Yeah but a hell lot more complicated! >.< I so need aspirin-the stress is getting to me. Apart from spacing out in class cuz I'm busy doddling initials and his initials on paper (I am so out of it now. I swear I can't concenrate on anything and my grades are SO going to go down... -_-') I have so much due tomorrow and next Wednesday and haven't started yet. I procrastinate too much when I'm on LJ. I should shut off the internet and do my essays! and read that book and the two outlines due tomorrow!... Or I could start later... No must start NOW!
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2007 10:38 pm (UTC)
XD. Sounds like you are having similar complications as Watanuki... minus the LJ stuff.. haha. You do your school work! There will be more chapters to read when you are done!
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 10:12 pm (UTC)
Yeah... And even though this was a pure silly chapter.. It does happen, and I see that you understand it.. I have also had the really depressing days and one day just woke up happy.. It's a human thing I guess...
[info]daydreamer64 wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 10:37 pm (UTC)
yes we humans are really weird. I've had those days, trust me. I think I got happy though because of a dream but forgot what it was about. -_-' hehe. Bad memory I guess.
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 10:58 pm (UTC)
I used to keep a dream journal. It was fun.. I like interpreting dreams.. It's easier to do it if you know the other person well though.
[info]piph_chan wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 10:06 pm (UTC)
Finally Watanuki is opening his eyes(and heart)! <3333

*talks to Watanuki*
Of COURSE you are ready to talk to Doumeki. Now be a good boy and go apologise to him so you both can have hot smex have hot smex.
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2007 10:52 pm (UTC)
XD. He still hasn't learned anything yet. Be patient! lol.
[info]kattmad wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2007 05:27 pm (UTC)
such a cute little pipe fox too...I wish I could have one
mmm...Doumeki has a key to apt. to give bear? or he gave it thru Yuuko...what a guy
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2007 05:36 pm (UTC)
lol. In the anime he is seen sneaking into the apartment through the balcony at random points.. He gets in.. No one really knows how.. Shh! hehe
[info]kattmad wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2007 05:50 pm (UTC)
Ah hah...so agile

I have only read the manga up to the English translations...I have the anime on disc, I should watch it on the computer...
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2007 05:56 pm (UTC)
I've read up to the most recent chapter released in Japan... The newest one just came out the other day.