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Agony and Rapture Chapter 9

  • Nov. 19th, 2007 at 8:57 PM
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Title: Agony and Rapture
Rating: PG-13
Summary: When Doumeki starts tutoring a girl for math, he ends up spending more time with her, and less with Watanuki. Watanuki is NOT jealous. Really!
Disclaimer: Characters belong to clamp!
A/N: WARNING: Lots of Angst! Sorry this was a few days late... It's the climax, and I wanted to make sure it came out alright, so I put a lot of work into this one for you guys ... Beta'd by the wonderful lehst, I love you so much!



I don't really think I needed to run, but that's what I had done anyway. The only sound that could be heard were my school dress shoes on the paved road.

It couldn't be that late, but it was silent, so silent, and my footsteps echoed. No matter how quiet I tried to be my footsteps were as loud as an old car engine. Annoyingly loud.

I wasn't sure when I started to slow down, but for some reason I had to quiet my steps. It just seemed wrong to be making this terrible racket when people might be sleeping, though that was only half the reason.

I was still tired. I couldn't keep up the sprint, and eventually I stopped, leaning a hand against the wall to catch my breath.

I felt weak. The point of coming out was to go to see Doumeki, but could I make it like this?

I turned around until my back faced the wall, sliding down until I was sitting on the cold pavement. Freezing was a better word. It was so cold, and it was only autumn, wasn't it?

I pulled my jacket tighter around me as a breeze picked up. It started slow, and then the wind began to blow harder until my hair seemed to be standing sideways as it was whipped about by the relentless force.

It was like the wind was telling me that I could not give up here.

So, slowly, I stood back up looking in the direction I would be walking. I would not let anything else stop me. It didn't matter how tired I was; I had decided I was going to go see Doumeki, that I was going to tell him how I felt, and that was all that mattered.

But the wind was coming from the direction I was traveling in. It wasn't telling me not to give up, it was telling me to turn back, or more like forcing me to with how powerful the gale was. I almost felt like I would drift away.

"Are you the one with the eyes?" came a voice that glided to him on the wind itself. A small, gentle voice, but it didn't seem at all friendly.

"What?" I question, looking aroud for the owner of the voice. I hoped beyond hope that I had not passed out again.

"You can hear me... you know I am here... you must be the boy... that can see us... I will... have your... power!"

The wind picked up once more, and this time I flew against the wall with a painful thud.

Why did this have to happen when I was finally on my way to talk to Doumeki? I just had to be attacked by some sort of evil spirit. I was going to die here, wasn't I? I would be eaten, and there was nothing I could do but wait for it to happen.

So I closed my eyes and waited for it, pain surging through my body already. I would never be able to tell Doumeki.

"Are... you afraid?" Came the voice again, traveling on the wind as it had before, "I will devour you quickly... I do not... have time to... linger."

The voice now echoed in the air, I could feel the voice inside me, as the pain intensified. It was all over.

And then there was a flash of light, a blinding light that I could see with my eyes still closed, and the wind died down.

I opened my eyes again, looking right, then left.

Down the road I saw him.

"Dou...me...ki," I started, I tried to stay awake, I couldn't pass out here. I was tired, and in so much pain, it would be easier just to let myself go here. But I had to talk to him.


"Yuuko-san... She told you I was coming, didn't she?" I asked as he reached me. I couldn't move, I didn't have the energy.

He nodded, dropping his bow next to me, "You're such an idiot, Watanuki."

I looked up at him, ready to yell at him for calling me an idiot, but then I just realised; he had said my name. He usually only said 'hey you' or sometimes just 'you', but he had actually said my name.

"I've gotta get you back to her place." He said, gently lifting me off the ground.

"Doumeki?"

"Hn?"

"Will you... stay this time?"

He raised an eyebrow, looking me over.

"You must have hit your head hard."

"Doumeki... please, I... I need you. Please, stay with me." I pleaded with him. I never got to hear his answer as my world spiraled into blackness for a second time that day.

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"A wind spirit, huh?" I asked Yuuko later that night.

It must have only been a few hours later when I woke up, and I just couldn't go back to sleep. Yuuko was still awake, and there was already tea made, and she had been sitting out on the porch looking up at the stars.

She nodded, taking a long drag from her pipe.

"Um...Where is.."

"Doumeki-kun is sleeping."

"He didn't go home?"

She shook her head, "He wanted to stay here to make sure you were alright, but he was very tired, so I told him he should sleep."

"I can't believe... he actually stayed."

Yuuko looked up at me and smiled, "You need him here, don't you?"

I looked at her shocked for a moment, feeling my face turn red as I looked away, "I guess... I do."

"And you told him that?"

I nodded, and looked back at her, "I did."

"Good."

She took another drag of her pipe before turning back around and standing up, "You really should get some sleep Watanuki-kun. I expect breakfast early tomorrow!"

"WHAT!" I yelled back at her as she walked up beside me and put a hand on my shoulder.

"Watanuki-kun is such a good boy."

"Ah.. Yuuko-san, what room is Doumeki sleeping in?"

"Oh! Watanuki-kun's such a naughty boy!"

"WHAT!? That's not what I meant at all!" I said, waving my hands around to emphasise my statement.

"He's sleeping in the room across the hall from yours."

She giggled and walked away, as I stood there staring at the sliding paper door for a moment.

He stayed. I felt my heart rate increase as I walked back into Yuuko's shop. Sure, I was happy, but at the same time dreading what he would say. But I guessed that Doumeki still being here was a good sign.

I opened the door to the room across mine, hearing the the soft breathing coming from the futon in the dark room. Swallowing hard, I walked into the room quietly closed the door, hoping not to wake him up.

I sat down next to the futon. He was lying on his back and I watched his chest rise and fall as he took in a breath and then let it out.

Doumeki. The one I cared about the most. Doumeki. The one I loved.

"Kimi...hiro..."

My eyes widened as I looked up to see his face. He was still asleep. Doumeki sleep talks? I almost laughed, but I didn't want to wake him up.

"Shizuka..." I whispered, pulling up the covers and slipping underneath them. I wanted to be as close to Doumeki as possible.

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Comments

[info]kurorinslvr wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 02:54 am (UTC)
I love the ending, i can't wait to see Doumeki face when he wakes up and found Watanuki cuddle against him. so much love.
[info]kurorinslvr wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 02:56 am (UTC)
I also like the enitre chapter, i got scared for Watanuki at the attacking but Doumeki always be there to protect him.

"Watanuki-kun is such a good boy."

"Ah.. Yuuko-san, what room is Doumeki sleeping in?"

"Oh! Watanuki-kun's such a naughty boy!"

"WHAT!? That's not what I meant at all!" I said, waving my hands around to emphasise my statement.

i like this line it is so Yuko.
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 02:59 am (UTC)
XD. I thought it was funny.
[info]sarahxchan wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 03:01 am (UTC)
sdjkfasdfalsdkflkajsdflk! <3333333 My heart melted. Ahh! Thank you so much. :3
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 03:05 am (UTC)
Of course! One or two more chapters to go!
[info]lonewolfe001 wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 05:38 am (UTC)
Sqeeeeeeeee!!! Please update soon. That was so sweet
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 05:40 am (UTC)
Yup! One or two more chapters left! I will write the next one tomorrow!
[info]black_feenix wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 06:44 am (UTC)
awwwwwwwww. Big awwwww. That was so full of sweetness and love and funnyness (Yuuko as always) and worry (Watanuki against the wind spirit. Can't wait to see Doumeki's reaction!! :3
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 01:40 pm (UTC)
Yep! Thanks! New chapter coming soon!
[info]black_feenix wrote:
Nov. 21st, 2007 01:16 am (UTC)
Goodie!
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 21st, 2007 01:22 am (UTC)
Yep! ^^
[info]batty_angel wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 11:28 am (UTC)
*is currently crying an ocean*

The love has finally come out into the open!!! YAAAY! T___T *gives the author several mokona cookies*
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 01:41 pm (UTC)
I want Mokona cookies.. lol

Thanks!
[info]sillyangelfaery wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 08:07 pm (UTC)
>______________< OH WOW I LOVE YOU. AND THIS. AND THESE TWO. AND THE WHOLE DAMN CLAMP CONCEPT OF xxxHOLiC. LOOOOOVE, I SAY. X3 ♥
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 08:47 pm (UTC)
Haha, thanks.. but..

IT'S NOT OVER YET!!! WEEEEE!!!

*sugar high*
[info]daydreamer64 wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 08:29 pm (UTC)
"Ah.. Yuuko-san, what room is Doumeki sleeping in?"

"Oh! Watanuki-kun's such a naughty boy!"


OMG! I loved it! ^.^ That line was made of win! This whole chapter was made of win! ^.^ I'm so glad you took longer in the chapter-it made the wait so worth it! ^-^
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 08:48 pm (UTC)
haha, thanks! And I still have a chapter or two more to go.. We'll see how the next one works out!
[info]daydreamer64 wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 09:29 pm (UTC)
Yes, keep going! I want more! *squee*
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 09:32 pm (UTC)
Yep yep!
Maybe tomorrow the next chapter will be up.. because... um.. I have to work today... and stuff.. lol
[info]piph_chan wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 08:42 pm (UTC)
HANYAAAAAANN!!! <3333333

That was SO cute!! Love is in the air *dances* <33333

[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2007 08:49 pm (UTC)
XD, still gotta wait until the next chapter to see what Doumeki says.. haha. Thanks!
[info]popkin16 wrote:
Nov. 21st, 2007 01:12 am (UTC)
I was wondering when Watanuki was going to get attacked by a pretty serious spirit. After all, Doumeki's not around as much to protect him.

Aww, Doumeki said Watanuki's first name in his sleep! Things seem to be looking up.

Oh, and I loved Yuuko's line, "Oh! Watanuki-kun's such a naughty boy!" Such a Yuuko thing to say...
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 21st, 2007 01:24 am (UTC)
XD, that chapter was so much fun to write.. lol. one or two more chapters to go! Look foreward to the next one in the next few days!
[info]popkin16 wrote:
Nov. 22nd, 2007 12:44 am (UTC)
I'm waiting (as patiently as I can). :D

I think once this story is finished, I'm going to go back and read it all in one go.
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 22nd, 2007 01:25 am (UTC)
Haha. I'm glad you like it.
[info]black_widow1417 wrote:
Nov. 21st, 2007 03:54 am (UTC)
*SNUGGLES!!!!!* o.m.g. SNUUUUUGGGLES! *is dead from the cuteness*

loved it loved it LOVED it.
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 21st, 2007 07:40 am (UTC)
XD, and it's not over yet! One or two more chapters to come!
[info]konrankoneko wrote:
Nov. 23rd, 2007 03:21 am (UTC)
Kya!!! >w< This is my favorite chapter by far! I loved Watanuki getting saved by his man. Watanuki and Yuuko's coversation sent me into a giggle fit. I love Doumeki saying Watanuki's first name in his sleep. That was so sweet! Seeing them wake up together is gonna be great. I can't wait! >w
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 23rd, 2007 03:25 am (UTC)
Yep! Working on that now!
[info]konrankoneko wrote:
Nov. 23rd, 2007 05:38 am (UTC)
Really?!?! YAY!!! ^____^
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 23rd, 2007 05:46 am (UTC)
Yeah. I probably won't get a chance to talk to Lehst today, but it should be done soon.
[info]ediblewoodwinds wrote:
Nov. 25th, 2007 03:25 am (UTC)
This is delightful. Yuuko never ceases to make me laugh. Thank you for writing, I can't wait for the next installments. ♥
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 25th, 2007 04:28 am (UTC)
Thank you! Next chapter should be out soon! Sorry about the wait!