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Agony and Rapture Half Chapter

  • Nov. 25th, 2007 at 4:52 PM
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Here is a little peice from Doumeki's POV somewhere in the middle of the story. A little angsty drabble-type thing for you until chapter 10 is done, enjoy!


Doumeki swept the courtyard at the temple where he lived. A chore he did almost every morning for years.

It was a chilly fall day, and leaves were falling to the ground, giving him more work as he pushed the dry, fragile leaves into a pile.

Then he was at that spot again. The spot where Watanuki had gotten caught into the web one day, almost a year ago. The day he had destroyed the spiders web to help Watanuki. He had lost his eyesight in his right eye later that day, but soon Watanuki had done something stupid, to get Doumeki's eyesight back.

Doumeki had hated it.

He had given up half his eyesight for Watanuki, and later quite a large amount of his own blood to keep Watanuki alive. Yet Watanuki continued to act the same towards him.

Doumeki didn't want to be Watanuki's rival, at the very least, Doumeki wanted to be friends. But Watanuki still yelled, still called him an idiot, and didn't seem to appreciate Doumeki's efforts at all. How could someone that was always helping others still think only of himself in situations like this? And why did Doumeki still like him? Why did Doumeki still continue to be around?

Why?

"I think it's better when it is just me and Himawari-chan. I don't want you to think I need you around or anything, whether or not she is bad luck! And she is not bad luck to me! When I see her face, it makes me happy! Unlike some people I know!"

Doumeki sighed, looking over at the gate. Watanuki had actually said that. Watanuki never paid any attention to... well anything. He had a hard time figureing things out for himself, he never looked at the big picture, and he rarely took interest in the details either.

There was one thing Doumeki did know, he loved Watanuki, and he would wait. He would wait as long as it took for Watanuki to realise this, but he was going to let Watanuki figure it out himself. Watanuki needed to learn things on his own, that was the only way for him to be ready.

And Doumeki still had that girl to tutor.

It didn't matter to him if Watanuki thought that he was ignoring the bispectacled teen. In truth he wasn't really. Doumeki wasn't acting differently at all, it was Watanuki that was acting different. And the way Watanuki was changing, Doumeki could see it, and he could only hoped that it would be enough.

Comments

[info]kurorinslvr wrote:
Nov. 25th, 2007 10:05 pm (UTC)
thanks for the drabble, i was wondering what were Doumeki's thought about the current situation. I understand more Doumeki now. looking forward for Chapter 10 ^-^
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 25th, 2007 10:09 pm (UTC)
Yep! I roleplay Doumeki a lot, so this is what I thought he would feel.
[info]ediblewoodwinds wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 01:30 am (UTC)
Aw... Poor Doumeki, how Watanuki ignores his endeavors. It almost makes me want to knock some sense into Watanuki. Almost. But that would be rude. :3

Still holding out for chapter 10!
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 01:43 am (UTC)
Thanks, waiting on Lehst right now!
[info]lonewolfe001 wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 05:11 am (UTC)
I wish i could hit Watanuki over the head for being so blind. poor doumeki, i hope he gets what he wants in chapter 10.

Lonewolfe001
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 05:40 am (UTC)
XD. What does Doumeki want??? Nah.. Don't think Watanuki is ready for that.
[info]renki_chan wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 10:29 am (UTC)
great Doumeki's POV ^_^
*waiting for chapter 10 ^^*
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 01:19 pm (UTC)
I was trying to decide if I want to do a part II for Agony and Rapture that is all from Doumeki's POV.
[info]renki_chan wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 07:48 pm (UTC)
OHHHH *___* That would be great ^^
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 08:07 pm (UTC)
Maybe... Still thinking about it.
[info]black_feenix wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 11:38 am (UTC)
You just couldn't resist a Doumeki point-of-view, huh? XD
Thank goodness for this lil bit of goodness! But now you've just left me craving moooooore. Can't wait for chapter 10.
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 01:20 pm (UTC)
Well... I like doing Doumeki POV... Almost all my other stuff is him POV.
[info]ariadnechan wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 05:47 pm (UTC)
i love it!!!
thank for let us know his point of view!!
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 05:58 pm (UTC)
Of course!
[info]daydreamer64 wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 06:07 pm (UTC)
So beautiful!

Oh the angst! >.>
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 07:13 pm (UTC)
lol, thanks.
[info]lehst wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 09:56 pm (UTC)
D: I told you that people needed to know what Doumeki was thinking.
Good job. ^^
[info]deathbyalice wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2007 10:41 pm (UTC)
I know.. I love you!